One of the most challenging things about writing a book, in my opinion, is jargon. Technical lingo. Those words peppered throughout speech that say, “This person is an XYZ, and he knows his stuff.”
There’s a fine line to walk–you don’t want to overwhelm a reader, but you want them to get the impression that you as a writer know what you’re talking about. And more, you want to creating setting, mood, and accurate characterization through these word choices.
I just finished reading a super-fabulous historical, Surrender the Heart by MaryLu Tyndall. One of the things I expect of MaryLu’s books is a wonderful knowledge about tall ships and seafaring, and she knows how to strike the balance between showing me the details of a ship and not making my eyes glaze over with it all. I closed her book and thought, “Wow. She obviously knows her stuff. She imparts her wisdom. The characters come across perfectly. And I shiver at the thought of ever writing anything on this topic, because how in the world would I keep it all straight?”
And though, yes, I deal with this issue in historicals all the time, the first story to pop to mind when I contemplated it was my contemporary, Seized. My hero is an ex-SEAL, so he uses military jargon all the time among his friends.
Now, I’m an avid watcher of NCIS (and was of JAG back in the day), so I at least know TV jargon. =) Not exactly dependable research, but they’re pretty good at establishing setting and mood, anyway. I read a lot. I visit a lot of websites when I’m researching something. But I’m never quite sure I’m getting the jargon right until one of my critters goes, “What are binocs? Binoculars?” and I lift my brows and realize I hadn’t even intentionally peppered that particular shorthand in. I like it once that starts happening, when I can stop thinking about it so much and just let it flow.
Stop for a minute and think about some of your favorite books. When I do, I realize they all have this jargon-thing in common. The characters are so very much themselves that they think with these words, use them to make unique-to-them analogies, and convey a definite image. How about your favorites?
Hope everyone had a safe and fun weekend! My little fairy and turtle were adorable and polite as they skipped around the neighborhood, so I’m a proud mama. =)
Roseanna M. White is a bestselling, Christy Award winning author who has long claimed that words are the air she breathes. When not writing fiction, she’s homeschooling her two kids, editing, designing book covers, and pretending her house will clean itself. Roseanna is the author of a slew of historical novels that span several continents and thousands of years. Spies and war and mayhem always seem to find their way into her books…to offset her real life, which is blessedly ordinary.
I have a hard time with that in regards to teen slang. Not only is it always changing, but a little goes a long way.
I need to get several jargons right in my current novel, including astronaut lingo. EVA means Extra Vehicular Activity or spacewalk, not Eats Vegetables Absolutely!