Thoughtful About . . . Plotting (No, Not World Domination–Yet. Mwa ha ha ha)

Giveaway – last day to enter for a chance to win Lena Nelson Dooley’s Love Finds You in Golden, New Mexico!

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So, I’ve been having a fabulous writing streak. I’m talking super-fab. The last few days I’ve been managing a chapter a day, which is just awesome. And while those chapters need some tweaking, the overall stuff is good. Cuz see, I had these things planned out to a T. I knew exactly what had to happen, and I knew I was pushing toward a break of sorts, so I had that extra “umph” going on. All I had to do was get my characters to this certain point, and then I have to skip a couple years and pick back up when things get interesting again.

And I did it. I got there, yesterday evening.

Now what?

LOL. It’s one of those crazy things. I know what needs to happen later. I even know the big events that need to happen next. But I was so focused on working out the details of this first section that I totally neglected brainstorming the details of the next part. Okay, not neglected so much as just haven’t had the time yet.

Today, my writing time is going to be spent going through my notes and hashing out a time line for the events of the rest of the book. It’s full of huge historical stuff, so I need to map those out and then figure out the character plots that are going to propel the story to those biggies.

Plus I still have some important questions to answer–God’s gonna have to whisper in my ear about those, I think.

In short, I’m having fun and am looking forward to some good plotting today. And I’m riding high, knowing I am 1/3 of the way done this book. If I can keep up this chapter a day rate, I’ll be finished in another month! Woo hoo!

Next step: world domination. Mwa ha ha ha! (Okay, so I’ll be content if I can convince my daughter that bugs are not the root of all evil. Anybody got any tips for that??)

Thoughtful About . . . Discoveries

Two giveaways – Jennifer Hudson Taylor’s Highland Blessings and Ginny Smith’s Third Time’s a Charm (last day!!).

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I love history. Have I mentioned that before? And it’s not that I just love learning it for its own sake–I mean, that’s cool and fun, but I always have an ulterior motive. Wild guess at what that is? Ding, ding, ding! You got me–I’m always trying to figure out how to weave it into fiction.

But much as I love learning about history in general, I especially love learning about particular history, because inevitably God has given me a story that works perfectly with it. The other day I was sitting there reading a Greek history (as in, written by an ancient Greek historian) and kept entertaining my husband with cries of, “Sweet! This is perfect!!” I thought I was going to have to do some major explaining for a few plot points in Jewel of Persia, but as it happens, my premise actually HAPPENED. How cool is that? I love God! It’s all Him, to give me ideas that are actually plausible. Woo hoo!

But that’s not the only discovery I’m going to touch on today. Last night I also took a webinar by the good folks at Phenix & Phenix Publicity. It’s a prerequisite for one-on-one training they’re offering contracted authors at conference this fall, so I took it in case I decide to go that way for appointments.

What did I learn? Well, first, that I’m probably never going to run into some of the situations they touched on. Being called on by Fox News as an expert? Um, not likely. Maybe in some bizarre stretch of the imagination, but I’ll be thrilled if I ever make it on television for anything. Even locally, since we don’t have much local opportunity, LOL. But I also learned that the things I can do, I pretty much am doing.

Example? They recommend getting your name out in the right circles by reviewing other books in your genre. Um, check, says the founder of the Christian Review of Books. They recommend having a website that provides something to readers, other than just selling your book (like a blog or research stuff). Check, says Roseanna the Blogger who, at her husband’s insistence, wrote that charming Encyclopedia Roseannica. They said to never, NEVER create an online platform that you then abandon. Check, says Roseanna the Compulsive Emailer/Facebook updater.

You know what impressed me most about these people, though? When asked if someone should hire a publicist on a limited budget, he said, “No. If you only have a few thousand to spend, spend it on building your presence yourself.” I can really respect someone who says not to rush out and hire them, LOL.

And those are my discoveries this week. Hope ya’ll are having a good one!

Thoughtful About . . . Feelin ‘ It

Giveaway – Last day to enter for Sarah Sundin’s A Distant Melody
Giveaway of Stray Drop – at the fabulous Jennifer Taylor’s blog

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First, a funny story. Over the weekend we went to the big St. John’s vs. Naval Academy Croquet Tournament . . . yeah, only Johnnies or Annapolitans have a clue what that is, LOL. Suffice it to say that the entire front campus is covered with picnic blankets and lawn chairs, people dressed in fun hats and dresses and suits, and a generally fun day.

Anyway. At one point I look over at Xoe, who is standing in the middle of our picnic blanket and facing . . . no one. Nothing. Except an older woman who’s standing a few feet away, watching the game. Now, picture my little golden-haired girl here–hip cocked out, hand on it, other hand in that classic “posing” gesture down her leg. And she just stood there, waiting, until the older woman finally looked down at her, smiled, and commented on how pretty she looked. And which point she simpered, grinned, waved, and ran back to me. It was all I could do not to laugh out loud. Amazing how a girl so impatient about everything else can stand so still for so long to await some praise. LOL.

On other topics, I’m happy to report that after a rather nasty relapse of the flu symptoms yesterday (totally blame those spicy green beans I should have known better than to eat on Tuesday!), I’m feeling quite the thing today. Of course, my diet is going to stay bland for the next few days. No question.

In that brief stretch of time when I was feeling well this week, I was debating titles for my new book. A few people mentioned Just Another Wife sounded too modern, which is a thought I’d had before too, though some others thought it perfect. I’m going for 100% “WOW!” here, though, so I’ve been thinking of new ones.

I came up with quite a few, but the one to lead the way with my critique partners is . . . Jewel of Persia. What’s everyone think?

Thoughtful About . . . News!

Today’s the last day to enter to win Jill Williamson’s To Darkness Fled!!

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So it’s been an interesting week. As I’ve considered what would be a good followup to A Stray Drop of Blood, I got an idea for another Biblical Fiction that would be a new twist on the familiar Esther story. I wrote four and a half chapters of it a while back when the idea blossomed, and this past week I hammered out a synopsis and a blurb, polished up the first three chapters.

My thought? I’d run the idea past my agent and see what she thought about the possibility of trying to get a big CBA publisher interested. Meanwhile, my hubby/publisher of Stray Drop read it and loved what I was doing with it. Being the fabulous supporter he is, he told me to go ahead and get my agent’s take on the big houses, but that he thought it would be a good title for WhiteFire to do too.

My agent’s response was quick–given my proposals that are under consideration at the big houses right now, she didn’t think it was a good idea to toss a Bib-Fic out there right now. They’re a dubious sell in CBA, and unrelated to what I’m already trying to sell. She advised that I write it–but that I write it for WhiteFire.

I’ll confess–my initial reaction was a rather long, “Oooohhhhhhhh. Siiiiiiggggghhhh.” But then what this meant began to sink in. It means I can write this story in its full scope, without concern for keeping it under 100K. I’ll keep a lot of control over it. And I don’t have to wait who-knows-how-long to gain an editor’s eye. Instead, my husband and I sat down and soon had a plan of attack.

Which means that my second novel, Just Another Wife, will be releasing in summer 2011 from WhiteFire Publishing! My editor’s a real slave-driver, so I have to have the manuscript finished in the next few months (that’s a joke–I decided on this deadline, LOL). And boy-howdy, it feels good to have something I now HAVE to get done! I love direction!

For those of you who might now be wondering what this story’s all about, here’s the blurb I was working on earlier this week:

Kasia thinks she’ll lose herself when she is taken to the palace to wed Xerxes–instead she finds an unexpected love with the king who is regarded as a god by his people. She, of all his wives, is the only one who loves him for the man beneath the crown. She, of all his wives, is the only one to threaten the careful balance of the world’s largest empire. When the king’s advisers realize how much sway this mere Jewish girl has over Xerxes, an intrigue springs up to rival the war with Greece. Kasia knows she will never take the place of the dethroned Amestris, but when she discovers that her best friend from childhood has arrived at the House of Women, she determines to use her influence to work for God’s people. Esther will be crowned–and though Kasia inadvertently turned Persia against the Jews, she knows Esther can save them.

In a combination of the familiar story of Esther told in the Bible and the history of Xerxes as told by Herodotus, Just Another Wife is a story of a love that nearly tears an empire apart, and the friendship that knits it back together.

Thoughtful About . . . My Guys

Thoughtful About . . . My Guys

Don’t forget the giveaway of Ann Shorey’s The Promise of Morning!

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Today’s a pretty cool day in my history. It’s my husband’s and mine dating anniversary–twelve years that we’ve been together! Woo hoo! I was 15 when he became my boyfriend, and we’ve been going strong ever since, never so much as a passing breakup to mar our record. =) David’s the only guy I’ve ever kissed, the only guy I ever loved, and I’m so blessed to have found him so early in life.

We got some raised eyebrows when we became a couple. I was the epitome of a good girl–top of the class, never got in a whiff of trouble. David . . . in a conventional sense, he wasn’t a rebel. But he just didn’t care to bend to the (seriously) over-inflated power-grabbing of our school’s then-principal, so he came off as one to the rest of us. Didn’t take long for people to lose interest in us–until we got engaged during senior year, which just isn’t done these days without incentive, if you know what I mean. 😉

All these years later, people are finally willing to grant that, yes, we knew what we were doing. Yes, sometimes these days teens are responsible enough to handle a serious relationship. Sometimes it really is the Lord’s will to defy convention. (And don’t get me started on how new that no-teen-romances-last thing really is.)

Now onto my other guy, the 2-year-old one. =) Anyone who saw yesterday’s blog or my Facebook stuff knows he was having some breathing issues, wheezing–probably RSV. He’s doing much better now, no wheezing thus far today.

Gotta say, though, dealing with this on Tuesday really took me back–and not in a good way. When Rowyn was born, he had pneumo-thorax–gas outside the lung that kept the lungs from fully expanding, which means fast, shallow respirations. He spend the first day of his life under an oxygen hood in the NICU, while Mommy prayed they wouldn’t have to get rid of the gas manually as the oxygen would work. (It did.) Hearing him breathing fast and shallow again on Tuesday catapulted me back to that NICU, even though I knew this couldn’t be related. This time, at least, his blood-oxygen levels were fine.

Yesterday he was still wheezing a bit in the morning, but he was happy as a clam all day long and high-energy. Unlike me, who was sleep deprived and showing it before my two-hour nap. =) He’s even better today, so I’ve got no qualms with pawning him and Xoe off on a grandparent this evening so David and I can go out to dinner. =)

Hope everyone has a great April 8th!

Thoughtful About . . . Building Character(s)

Today’s the last day to enter my giveaway of Meander Scar and Carman’s giveaway of A Stray Drop of Blood. Still have time on The Character Therapist‘s of Stray Drop, though!

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So I’ve been thinking about characters lately. Probably because all of the new reviews have mentioned mine. I confess I was a little nervous when I realized that Jeannie at The Character Therapist was going to dissect them. “Yikes!” I said. “What if she tells me I got them ALL WRONG?” LOL.

You see, there are Methods for creating characters. Charts. Seminars. Whole books written about it. You can interview your characters. You can determine their type. You’re supposed to know their goals, their desires, their fears. We’re told to map out the black moment in the story, to make them do what they would never do, to figure out what the worst thing is for them and then make it happen.

Um . . . I never do that. When I sit down with all the lovely, organized charts and the pretty, detailed questionnaires, I inevitably come up with something profound like, “Derrrrrrrrrrrr. I dunno.” If you ask me what my heroine’s black moment is going to be, I’d probably say something like, “Well, you know. When she, um . . . gets all upset and stuff.”

In some ways, I just can’t plot this stuff out ahead of time. My characters generally just are to me. I don’t want to analyze them, I just want them to give them their voice. My hubby has always said characters are my strong point, but, you know, he’s biased. According to the Experts, my way of doing things is totally Not It.

Or maybe it’s just Not Teachable. (My way, that is.) When you come up with an ordered, well-behaved way of developing characters, it’s something you can share. The methods that aren’t so methodical don’t lend themselves to classes or seminars. Which eventually brings me to the conclusion that I’m doing okay. Even though I don’t tend to research stages of grief or read articles on how people cope with tragedy, I do what I do–put myself in their shoes.

This week my friend turned me onto journaling through your characters, and I’m having fun with that because it’s what I do anyway–just being them. What I really love about this is that it helps me not only know my characters better, but myself as well. Through their logic I can reason through topics I’d never consider. I’ve had characters change my mind on some important matters.

Does my non-method and the intimacy inherent in it make for better characters? For me, yes. For other writers, undoubtedly not. But contemplating has helped me to see yet again that there is no right way, no wrong way to craft a good story. There is just the way that works for you. And I’m so, so grateful to the readers who have verified that it works just fine. Thank you!!