Remember When . . . The Old Was New Again?

Remember When . . . The Old Was New Again?

I’ve been enjoying my tenure back in Ancient Rome. Much as I miss my Culper Ring characters, it feels a bit like going home to return to the world of A Stray Drop of Blood and dig into life at the Visibullis villa outside Rome.
 
I haven’t chatted a whole lot about it here though. Some, but not a lot. In part because I haven’t been doing a ton of research. While, say, Jewel of Persia revolved around the historical events of the day, A Soft Breath of Wind is more about the people that made up the early Church. I haven’t had to look up things like fashion and housing much, because I already have that research on hand from Stray Drop. I haven’t had to do a ton of research on what was happening in the world that year, because, well, there wasn’t much worth noting, and my story revolves around those fictional lives.
But I’ve still had to look up a few things here or there, so I figured I’d share some of the fun things I learned recently. =) 
First, scissors. One of my primary characters is Samuel. Stray Drop readers will remember him as the little boy that Jason rescues, whom Abigail ends up adopting as her son. In A Soft Breath of Wind he’s all grown up and still the nurturer he was as a boy. He has, in fact, gotten some training from a physician and now serves as villa doctor whenever anyone needs him. 
My accident-prone heroine often needs him. =) I had a scene in which she falls off a stone wall and knocks her head pretty good, so he has to stitch her up. It was one of those where I’m describing the action as he’s talking to her mother, things like pulling the silk thread taut and then snipping it–somehow. What would he have used? A knife? Did they have scissors? (Yes, the things I have to question!)
Insert Roseanna jumping over to Google and asking. And finding these.
Picture from at the Metropolitan Museum in New York City in 2006 by Yannick Trottier
Apparently scissors have been around for a goodly while, LOL. These are labeled as being from the 2nd century, Turkish in design. But they follow the basic design used as far back as 1500 B.C., when they were invented in Egypt.
Sweet. So he can have scissors. =)
Around the same time, I was looking for details about Roman vineyards. I did a fair bit of reading, but one thing that really stuck out to me was that they used elm trees among the rows of grapes! I had no idea, but it’s pretty clever. The trees provide some shade, and the straight, slender trunks can be used like stakes to train the vines along. So when my characters wander the rows, they would have not just clusters of grapes at hand, but also elm trees.
Good to know. =)
So there’s just a taste of everyday life for Zipporah, Benjamin, Samuel, and Dara. Now back I go into their world. 😉

Word of the Week – Doorknob

Word of the Week – Doorknob

First of all, my apologies to anyone who missed my Thoughtful Thursday last week–I was taking a sick day. Just a cold, which I’m happy to say didn’t get as bad for me as it did for my hubby. Not that I’m happy it involved a fever for the hubby–you know what I mean. 😉

Anyway! A new week, and on we go to our feature word. So go ahead. Ask “Why in the world are we talking about doorknobs??”

Well, I’ll tell you. Because until 1847, we wouldn’t have been. That’s right–doorknob is only 167 years old! Which is darn new, considering how old doors are. 😉 But up until the 19th century, most doors used latches or handles rather than knobs. In fact, the knob we know and love wasn’t patented until 1878.

Who knew, right? 😉 So we historical writers better be sure to never have our medieval heroine carefully turning the knob and sneaking into a room. Just sayin’.

Happy February, all!

Remember When . . . The Series Was Complete?

Remember When . . . The Series Was Complete?

WhiteFire’s first series to be contracted and completed just got its final cover. The Twilight of the British Raj has won some awards and garnered a lot of very well-deserved praise. And when Christine Lindsay (the author) and I started chatting covers for the final installment, Veiled at Midnight, I think we were both rubbing our hands together in delight.

The first book of the series took place in British India of 1919. It was one of WhiteFire’s first two titles other than mine, and at that point, I was not designing covers. We hired the amazing George of Tekeme Studios, and he blew us away with this fabulous cover for Shadowed in Silk.

By the time book 2, Captured by Moonlight, rolled around, I had wet my feet in the design world, and Christine and I discussed it and agreed I’d try my hand at mimicking the style of the first with the images we had in mind for the second.

This third book jumps a generation. Set during the tumultuous partitioning of India and Pakistan in the 1940s, our hero and heroine are Cam, the little boy from the first book, and Dassah, who was a baby in the first book. I haven’t yet gotten my hands on the MS, but I know what an amazing writer Christine is, and I know we’re in for another sweeping saga of romance and suspense!

Christine started a Pinterest page for the book, which is where our idea-gathering began. She wanted gold on the cover, to represent the Joy of a new dawn. Though “midnight” is in the title (the Partition took effect at midnight), she wanted the images to represent a new day. (Not to mention we already had a night scene on cover 2…)

Our first thought was to use green and gold, to represent the Pakistan flag. The most compelling images we found were of a night sky, and my (very very very very very sloppy) playing around led to this.

Not bad. The lighting in that sky is amazing. But the original image of the model had her in a red sari, and changing red to gold is T-O-U-G-H. I managed a fair imitation with the low-resolution comp I downloaded from Shutterstock, but I knew it would be much harder with the real photo. So I was pretty happy when Christine emailed and said that her critique partner convinced her that red might  be okay. It was a color Dassah had shied away from in the earlier part of the book, because it reminded her too much of all the blood that had been spilt. But they decided that later in the book, she could instead realize it also represented the blood of salvation.

So we began with this model picture from Shutterstock. We both loved the pose, and I especially loved the motion in the sari.

Obviously, next we take out the background.

Now, you’ll notice that in this traditional sari, the belly is showing. This is accurate, both today and historically, but we decided that for a CBA book, we probably shouldn’t have the bare flesh. So I inserted a semi-transparent layer to mimic sheer fabric there.

Now it was time for the background. There are some absolutely GORGEOUS images of India that we considered. I knew the characters spend some time at a mountain lake, and I knew we wanted gold tones, so I decided to try out this one.

Plopping Dassah in front of it, I got this.


A good start. I liked the colors together, and the water. But I wasn’t wild about how distinct that building is in the back. And Christine pointed out (later, but let’s show the change now, LOL), that the light is hitting her on the wrong side. So I flipped her.

To blur the background in the distance, but not the water up close–because I LOVE that reflection–I duplicated the layer, blurred the top one, and then applied a layer mask and faded the top image from the bottom of the screen upward–that way, the bottom layer comes through in its non-blurred glory toward the lower portion and fades into the blurred image at the top.

Pretty, yes? But not there yet. The covers for this series are rich with texture layers. So to get the full effect and really see if it was going to give me the look I was going for, I first added in the elements that would stay the same as the first books (but with color changes)–the one I call “the lotus thingy” and the “banner thingy” that goes behind the title.

Oo, I was starting to like how this was coming together! I went ahead and added the title. Which, for these books, includes the title itself, then the last word faded out behind it in an exotic looking font.

Okay, so now I had a great base. I loved where it was going, I loved the way the red and the gold worked together. But now I needed to add some texture.

In the first cover, Tekeme had used a flower overlay that I liked but couldn’t match exactly. So for book 2, I used a paisley design. For this one, I wanted something altogether different. So I did a search for “photoshop texture lotus gold” (don’t you love the random words you can put together for searches? LOL) and I found this one.

It just felt promising from the get-go, LOL. So I plopped it down on the top, set the layer opacity way down, and used my fade-out gradient to make the middle of the layer completely transparent.

Oh my. Yes. This was the point where my breath got all knotted up in my throat, and I knew I’d found my look. I went ahead and added the layer with Christine’s name, making it red. But that layer is also always textured, so I duplicated my texture layer, shrank it down, and this time didn’t fade it out. The result was this, and I gotta say, silly as it is, that’s it’s one of my favorite elements on this whole cover, LOL.

So I added that, and also the series name where it belonged. And I was happy. Almost. Mostly.


There was just one thing missing–a border. Each of the other two covers have a border, just a slightly-darker version of itself. I needed something like that here, but I didn’t want to mess with what I had already, so I nearly left it off.

Then I looked at the original texture layer again. And I noticed that it had really cool sides that were not on my cover because I wanted the lotus part to extend off in both directions. How to get those on as the border, without interfering with the nice transparency of the original texture layer? Well, I fiddled with it until I figured out the obvious answer. I pasted it on, narrowed it to fit the width of the book, and then deleted everything accept that border part that I wanted. And voila!

And there we have it. The real, honest-to-goodness finished version of the front. (Haven’t created the back yet.) I was fairly giddy with it, so showed it to hubby/publisher David, who said, “Wow. Yeah. That’s it.”

So I emailed it to Christine, who said, “CAN I SHOW THIS OFF?” 😉

I emailed it to best friend/crit partner Stephanie, who said, “I think this might be my favorite of all your designs!”

I don’t pick favorites, LOL. But I do adore this cover. I like the continuity with the other books in the series, but I also like where it’s different. I feel like this one was somehow more my design and less trying to mimic that first cover. And I just adore those colors together. So overall, we’re all very pleased. =) The Twilight of the British Raj will finish up in style!

Word of the Week – Escalate

Word of the Week – Escalate

Patent diagram of the first escalator (“revolving stairs”) – 1859

This one got me. I admit it. I looked it up during edits on a WhiteFire book because I wasn’t sure it was quite early enough in the sense used. And what do I find? A surprise!

Escalate is new. Darn new. As in, from 1922–and that’s in the literal sense. It’s actually a back-formation of escalator (from 1900). Before that, the verb had been escalade. Not so different a word, right? Except that escalade has exactly one meaning: “to use ladders to scale a fortified wall.” Yeah, um…not how I use escalate!

So what of that meaning? The “to raise,” or “to intensify” meaning? Well…that didn’t come around until the Cold War! 1959 to be exact. I had no idea it was so new!

Thoughtful About . . . Distance

Thoughtful About . . . Distance

I’ve been writing for a long time. As in, a long time. I finished my first novel at age 13. My second at 16. Then six more by the time I was 21. That’s a lot of words on the page. A lot of plot. A lot of characters to come to love. And I always had the goal of getting published. Putting those stories into the world.

That means criticism.

Now, no matter what you do in life, you’re going to come up against criticism. But me…I wasn’t so good at taking it, and I can admit that now that I’m old (ahem) and wise (cough, cough). 😉 Even when it was a simple matter of needing to trim a few scenes, I couldn’t do it. I was too attached. I loved every word. I mean, if I read through something all on my own and saw a mistake or a way to make a sentence sound better, sure. I’d change it. But on someone else’s advice?

Nuh uh. No way.

Yeah…I had some work to do, LOL. I formed a critique group, and that helped so much. My internal protests to every suggestion quickly shrank from a day to a minute to a few seconds’ debate. I learned to measure and weigh advice.

I learned to adopt a distance between me and my work. To realize that my book wasn’t me. An attack on something I created (not that my critique partners attacked! But looking forward here to reviews…) was not an attack on my person.

Distance. It’s the friend of a writer. It’s the friend of everyone when it comes to these situations. It’s so easy to take things personally, but what does that lead to? Hurt feelings. Offense. Division. It happens in friendships, families, churches.

Lately, I’ve thought that I have distance pretty well down. Mastered. I invest my heart in my books while I write them, then I put them down. I walk away. And I approach all else about them with what I figured was healthy detachment. Changes to a book? In my whole direction? In what project I’m working on? I can do that. Why not. No problem.

But here’s the thing…when one has “mastered” distance, sometimes it masters you. Sometimes you look at everything with that lens. Sometimes you stop investing altogether. And that can’t be good. Because hope, faith, and detachment are a strange combination. And when that last one has the upper hand, you don’t always even realize if the other two have faded.

In this balancing act we call life, it seems like something or another is always out of whack, doesn’t it? We always have work to do. Right now, part of mine is in finding this particular equilibrium. In making sure that keeping a distance from my work doesn’t turn into keeping a distance from faith that God’s working through it.

I definitely need some space between me and the things of my hands. But between me and the work God’s doing in me–no. That I need to embrace fully. That I need to hold close. That I need to be protective of. So that I can still hope…not in a particular outcome, but in the One who’s controlling it.